Wednesday 12 April 2017

Lune et L'autre


On a gloomy night, the moon was shining on Annabelle who was holding a bucket with a red apple in it. Suddenly a flash of light glows in the sky as she pulls up her bucket. Then Annabelle saw that the moon didn't look normal. It flickered like a wink making her turn and gasp. The large see-through eye glowed in her blue eyes. Screaming at the top of her lungs, Annabelle scared the eye back to w”here it came from.

The eye was called Boris and he nervously came back for one more peek. This made all the trees light up. Boris stands up and takes a good look at Annabelle. Boom he coughed and it blew Annabelle out of her shoes. Then she looked around at the glistening fairy dust that floating in the air around her and her eyes lit up.

Boris looks round then zooms down to Annabelle, picking up a fence and dangling it like a necklace. He picked her up and drooped her gently. Then he drew the bucket out of the well and gave it to her.

Boris floated gently in the sky. Annabelle can see his eye reflecting in the bottom of the bucket. Then she smiled and said, “I will remember you.”

1 comment:

  1. Hi Charlotte,
    I really liked this story , it was capturing and I loved the way you used the name Boris it was very funny :) Next step : maybe try and use some different language features eg. WOW ! For onomatopoeia.
    Thanks Poppy

    ReplyDelete